pineapple321

Thanks so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review, glad you liked it :)

Thank you I was able to figure it out!

Hi, MapleWay! Glad you liked my poem :) And yes, could you tell me how to tag people? I'm new to this so I'm not sure how

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It was a good way of symbolizing heartbreak and resentment. The poem was also depicting how the ...

Thanks for the review!

Sorry, I meant "writer's work"

Thank you!

Hey, MaybeAndrew. I wasn't sure exactly what I was expecting from this! I have no suggestions. No critiques or anything. This was perfectly well written and was comedic. This is ...

Hi! I really loved your poem. It’s very true, a lot of us put up this facade of what we want others to see. In the poem you were also ...

Hi! Thanks for reading, Nicoletta-the young sister is 15. I should have made that clearer in my story.

By the first sentence, I was already hooked. The way you showed imagery throughout the story was great. The paragraph on the death I really liked. You got straight to ...

Hi, I am not sure how in the world you thought of this, but it was great. I enjoyed reading your analogy of comparing crying to a watercourse. The perspective ...

Hi! First off, I LOVED the poem. I really liked the symbolism of the phoenix "who rises from its ashes" as you said. It really illustrates ignoring negative vibes and ...