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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: 1

    Hello :) This is Perfectionwriter for your review. This poem was truly great. I loved reading it. I hope to see more from you. I love how for every stanza ...

    Jul 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Smile

    Hello! This is Perfectionwriter for your review! Beautiful poem, dear! I loved it very much. It had the perfect words and perfect sound to it. I kinda read it over ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: 1

    Wow. Just wow! Beautiful. 100% all the way. The words were just gorgeous and the message. I loved it. I think this is a poem that could be published in ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Smile

    Hello there! Perfectionwriter here for your review. I would just like to start off by saying this was a lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. However, I do have a ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: sometimes a river. sometimes an ocean.

    Hello there, Isha. This was a very nice poem. However, i would like to say a few things. This doesn't look like a poem in my opinion. A poetic line ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Goddess

    Hi there, Perfectionwriter at your service. On with the review. I love the words here. They give an amazing feel. That's what i love about poetry, you can feel it ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Maybe.

    Hello there, friend. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Your words were amazing. I love how you put it in a bolder font. I felt like it was RIGHT THERE ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My Dream

    Hi writer, I would just like to point out that this poem is fantastic. However, there a few things i would like to say. One, This poem is a bit ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Psychology of The damned

    Hi there writer, Your poem here is very rhythmical. That's the funny thing about poetry, it must have some kind of lyrical meaning to it. And you my friend, are ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Rain is Angels Crying

    Hello fellow writer, I would just like to say that this is amazing! You put your words together like silk. The only thing i would say; and this is just ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: She had asthma

    The imagery is amazing! Excellent work. You definitely offer new meaning to the word 'Poetry'. I can't even begin to describe the perfection here. I would absolutely love to hear ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Words and Actions

    I am blown away by this! The imagery you offer is just amazing. You give such detail and i'm actually seeing your words happen in my mind. I can't even ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: White

    This brings a lot of history in this. I believe that this would fit into the category of 'civil rights' in the 1950's. The sway of your words in this ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Writer's Block

    I truly thought that this was amazing. It really emphasizes the meaning that writing isn't always easy. You'll go through bumps in your writing career. Sometimes, i'll have writers block ...

    Jun 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Bad Drivers. (A Haiku.)

    This poem was very creative. I very much enjoyed it. I also love how it's put together, as a haiku. It actually brings memories back to me because haiku's were ...

    Jun 18, 2014


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25