penfeme

Thank you so much!! And yeah I like using non-popular terms no one has ever heard of.

Oh, I forgot to answer your question. The last part is italicized because it's sort of a reflection of the first part.

Thanks again for reviewing one of my poems. ;) And yeah, I'm not sure why I love punctuation so much. I used "light of the day" because I wanted to ...

Thank you for your review, lizzy. I already enhanced it in my documents, but I wasn't sure if I should change it here.

That's a whole lot more interesting than my assumption. Ha, I love it! Very thought-provoking.

Thank you!! And Happy Review Day to you as well. ;)

Agreed, friend. I believe this is very true. Many believe and are coerced because they are blind; sometimes deliberately. I think desire, ambition and greed can be a result of ...

I definitely think this poem could use some development. Also, thanks for noting the grammar error. Will change that.

Thank you!

Thank you for your review!

Hi! Thank you for your review! As for the first paragraph, it's just a list of the things no one knows about you and "an automaton forced inside your skeleton" ...

Thank you!! And yes, I thought about making the first paragraph like that but I needed an opinion on how it read for others.

Accidentally commented on my own post. ugh.

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the comments for improvements. I do need to work on flow in my poems, ha. :)

Thank you! :)