penfeme

Thank you for your review. Much appreciated!

Thanks for the feedback!

;D Ah, a road trip muse it was!

Thank you!

oh and darling? If you feel lost or despaired, write any time. I know just how upsetting life can be.

No problem! And thanks so much!

Hi there! Thank you so much for your review and suggestions!

Ah, thank you! You generally have the main message of it. It's mostly about hatred and how it hides within the human mind, you know? In family, in love, such ...

I wrote this after a flurry of emotions, that's why its structure is sort of 'everywhere'. Your review really helps though, you have no idea. THANK YOU!

Hey there, penfeme here reviewing your work. Overall, I love the imagery you here to describe the setting. Makes me feel as if I am standing there with you! I ...

Thank you, kindly! :) And I agree with the punctuation thing very much so, it's just that sometimes lines seem to read better without them.

Thank you! I do find this one rather hard to read, myself, ha.

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Yes, the ending bothers me a little. I just can't figure out a way to say what I want say without using those exact words :/. Anyway, thank you so ...

Thank you! ;)