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Howdy :D (I thought of a new greeting word). Again, I'm just gonna start with my reviewing right away. “What are you doing?” I look up at a dark-haired boy ...

Hello! Just me :D Still loving the story, and I'm not gonna stop reading it. “Of course, I didn’t mean to, I just wasn’t sure if, I mean I didn’t ...

Wow! This poem was extremely powerful! I've never really seen stanzas like this before, but you made it work well. There wasn't anything with wording or flow that seemed off ...

Hi! Just me again :D The first thing I'd like to say is that this is so creative! How the paintings rotate and change is awesome. The history of the ...

Hello :D I don't feel there's a need for an introduction XD I promise, I'm going to keep from correcting any errors you could find by proof reading by yourself. ...

Hello! Oh my gosh, I can't believe it's really happening! She's going to the Realm!!!! HOORAY!!! Alright, so a consecutive thing I've seen from the beginning to the end (or ...

Hi! I'm going to start trying to not leave reviews on EVERY chapter, because as already stated, you could catch what I'm correcting by just a quick proof read. One ...

Hi :D Just me again. I said I was gonna keep reading didn't I? "She steps closer, and her perfume washes over me. It’s cool and salty, like how the ...

Hi! It's Pendr, the person who left long tedious reviews on a couple of your later chapters (sorry again for that). I am going to start this story from the ...

Hi! Me again! Here for the Earth Benders! I read chapter 31 and REALLY wanted to know what happened previously (and after of course) so what better day to do ...

Whoa! This is so cool! Yup, I'm back. Still rolling with the Earth Benders to review! This poem explains life so perfectly! You're so good at channeling emotions not only ...

Hi again! Still here on behalf of the Earth Benders! I just wanted to read this after reading your revised version to see what you changed and which I liked ...

Hello! Pendr here on behalf of the Earth Benders! Cool poem, bro! Riz says I'm good at poetry, but Hobey, she needs to read some of yours (sorry, I'm reading ...

Hi! Pendr here for a review on behalf of the Earth Benders! I want you to know this is the first chapter of this I've read, so bear with me ...

Hey! Me again, still on behalf of the Earth Benders! I read chapter 31, and it was superb! I'll be doing the same thing I did in that review: making ...