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Re: Art Room
Thanks! The description is the funnest part of a story to me, so I guess that's why the rest of the aspects of my writing seem... thinned. I know I ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Art Room
I can definitely see all your points. And I agree! I think the adult nature is better explained if I say that these are real events, but names changed and ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: On Loving a Shadow
Thanks for the critiques! They're taken into account. (I thought I'd already written a thank-you comment but I don't see it on here...) anyway. Glad you guys liked it ^_^
Jun 23, 2012 -
Re: Listen carefully.
Wow. Fantastic piece. I don't even have any critiques-- I just thought i'd complement you on your fine work ^_^ this deserves to be featured. I love the style and ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: A Poetic Doodle
Thank you. I agree it was pretty bare-bones, especially for poetry, so I'm going to try and flesh it out a bit. And I know the formatting is weird in ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Wanton
Thanks for your reviews guys :) They really helped. In answer to your questions: I have never read a poem like that, how do I follow it? Well, you can ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Loved this way better than the real book. X-D excellent job
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: These little things...
nothing wrong with it except for the big words that I don't understand. :P
May 26, 2009 -
Re: I don't know :P (and springrain chose the title, so ha!)
LoL Snoinksterz! I don't think anyone else could possibly write a better poem than that for June, xD . It's too funny and awesome. Great job! 8) ~April
May 18, 2009 -
Re: The Awakening...
Omg! I hate my computer, somehow my sister *Mutters about how to kill her* did something and made it auto correct the barely to barley cause she was writing or ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
Nope! I've wondered about that plenty of times; what difference does it actually make if it is capitalized or not? It doesn't do anything really... But! It is officially grammatically ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Summer's Music
Thank guys! It probably took you a while to do those reviews... thanks for taking time out of your schedule! :D I needed it :lol:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Shady Debate
Thank you guys! *hugs* I needed those reviews :P
May 4, 2009 -
Re: No Match
Thank you all so much for your thoughts, nit- picks, and reviews! I enjoy getting help with my poetry, because it needs it, hehe. :oops:
May 4, 2009 -
Re: New Generation
Thank you all so much for your thoughts, nit- picks, and reviews! I enjoy getting help with my poetry, because it needs it, hehe. :oops:
May 4, 2009