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Hi Suke! I think this was a pretty good start. It left me asking questions about what is going to happen, which is a good thing because it makes me ...

Amy! I'm gonna review this :) Don’t stop, never stop, keep up with the stars follow the moons orbit, run ‘till the sunlight fades behind you. Should be moon's. And ...

Hey Bailey you told me to review this so I am and I sort of agree with RubberKnife. You are asking questions that you don't answer. You are telling us ...

Hi Val :) I think this was a very interesting idea. It is something like you said that people don't want to think about and often haven't and I think ...

Hi Cheesy! Like I told you in chat this is sort of disturbing....But I have one thing to ask I don't really understand the purpose of the Caroline character. It ...

Kylan, I don't know what to say. The murder of the Romanov family is something that has interested me for a long time now. I think you did a wonderful ...

Okay this poem has a ton of potential the way it is laid out you can put so much into it. There are many things you can describe here so ...

I remember when we had to write haikus last year. I was horrible at them. I couldn't get my ideas into the 5,7,5 format. But you did a wonderful job ...

Okay this was a love poem....I thought it was good because unlike most it wasn't very cliche. But there were some words in here that should be changed because they ...

Like the other people who have reviewed this I was a little confused about the time period. At the beginning I didn't know it was from a present day point ...

Cheesy this was funny. Not a lot of poems are against him...I don't think. But then again I don't know if I've ever read one that wasn't against him?? Oh ...

I agree with the other posts this was a wonderful poem. I don't really have any nitpicks except there were a few lines that need commas in the middle. It ...

Jigs. This is awesome. I bow down to Snoink (don't hurt me O Evil One) but this made me laugh. It was epic and I'm glad you got into the ...

Hi Hawk :) Please somebody heed my words, Can't anybody hear . The last line is a question it needs a question mark. To change this world forever, But how ...

Junie this poem was awesome I agree with Jon you should post more. But I do agree with Kammie. The larger words were a good effect and I think they ...