pdavinci

Hello, this is pdavinci here to review your short story. From the start, I felt like this was a well put together story. You got the dynamic duo, one not ...

I came across this today because the title intrigued me. While I did not personally study Latin (yet), I enjoy seeing it being used in writing. I actually did use ...

Hey, pdavinci here to review you work. I saw the title of your work and became intrigued, it sounded very interesting. It also had no reviews so I thought I ...

My god this was great. I am disappointed not to see my instrument up there. Even the bassoons and Oboes get more attention than us French Horns. Still though it ...

Glad to see the story continuing on nicely. Not too much for me to say here as I've pretty much covered it in my review of your first few chapters. ...

Wow...I mean...Wow. When it comes to stories, I personally enjoy either Science Fiction, a story based entirely on symbolism, or a realistic story about certain current events and man did ...

Despite this being a bit of an old story, I have to say that I overall enjoyed it. It reminded me of some of the older creepy pastas I used ...

Overall I enjoyed this story. As a fan of science fiction, I immediately got engaged to the story. The plot is a bit confusing from time to time, but it ...

I saw this chapter and was immediately interested. I don't know why, but "The Beginning" sounded like a nice chapter name. Overall the chapter was pretty good. Just like Flash ...

Hello there. In my opinion you wrote a very interesting piece and overall I enjoyed it. There are a few problems I must state though. First of all this doesn't ...

Overall it is not a bad story, but it seem very rushed and unresolved. In fact I think it was literally Action-Backstory-End. It just seemed rushed and seemed more like ...