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Re: Keratin
Hi there! This is a very beautiful and haunting poem and I absolutely adore poems like this. You invoke a raw sense of anger, yet the words you use to ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: Mirror
Hi there! I really enjoyed your poem, I find the topic of mirrors very interesting and I feel as though it brings a lot of different things you can play ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: The luggage bags under my eyes
Hey there! So I'm reading this poem at a kind of difficult time in my life and I feel every single emotion expressed here. Just the title alone seems to ...
Nov 3, 2016 -
Re: From Mrs Midas
Hi there! This is PastelQueen here to review your poem. Just a fair warning it's been awhile since I've reviewed something so please bare with me! I absolutely adore poems ...
Nov 3, 2016 -
Re: The dark side of history
I find this poem to be very nice and complex. The subject of the side of history we are never really exposed to isn't a very popular one, every one ...
Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: Flushed Cheeks
Hello! I haven't read too many romance poems but so far the ones I've read on this site haven't disappointed yet. Yours is one of the best I've read so ...
Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: Bad Texter
Hi there! This was a very powerful poem and I feel the thing that makes it so powerful is the language used. You made a very bold choice of using ...
Jul 30, 2016 -
Re: Blink and It's Gone
Hi! This is a very interesting poem that seems to go through multiple different situations people can be in that shorten or end their life all together. That is a ...
Jul 30, 2016 -
Re: He Kindly Stopped for Me
Hi there! This poem is just plain pretty. The imagery and word choice used paints such an amazing mental picture for the reader that it could almost be a scene ...
Jul 28, 2016 -
Re: Loneliness and Warmth
Hi there! Welcome to Young Writer's Society. This was a very beautiful and poetic story and I am impressed that it this was your first piece on this website. I ...
Jul 28, 2016 -
Re: Lost an' Found
Hi! Holy crap, this is a fantastic piece of work. I love the concept, which hits pretty close to home. I can see this person with a wide smile, tears ...
Jul 15, 2016 -
Re: Wonderings
Hi! This was a very great creative writing. I wouldn't call it a poem, because the only thing that seems to be in the form of a poem is the ...
Jul 15, 2016 -
Re: Poem of Your Eyes
Holy Moley! One of my biggest complaints with most poems is that people don't utilize the unique style of writing offered to them in poetry. You use every single bit ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Bitter Candy
Hello there! This, I feel, was a very different view on depression than what I've seen in a while. Usually something as melancholy as depression is symbolized by darkness or ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: "You're not that beautiful."
Hello! This was a very haunting and melancholy poem and I love it! Though it's short, the punch of emotions felt from beginning to end is extremely prominent. Especially in ...
Jun 29, 2016
