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  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Keratin

    Hi there! This is a very beautiful and haunting poem and I absolutely adore poems like this. You invoke a raw sense of anger, yet the words you use to ...

    Dec 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Mirror

    Hi there! I really enjoyed your poem, I find the topic of mirrors very interesting and I feel as though it brings a lot of different things you can play ...

    Dec 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The luggage bags under my eyes

    Hey there! So I'm reading this poem at a kind of difficult time in my life and I feel every single emotion expressed here. Just the title alone seems to ...

    Nov 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: From Mrs Midas

    Hi there! This is PastelQueen here to review your poem. Just a fair warning it's been awhile since I've reviewed something so please bare with me! I absolutely adore poems ...

    Nov 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The dark side of history

    I find this poem to be very nice and complex. The subject of the side of history we are never really exposed to isn't a very popular one, every one ...

    Aug 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Flushed Cheeks

    Hello! I haven't read too many romance poems but so far the ones I've read on this site haven't disappointed yet. Yours is one of the best I've read so ...

    Aug 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Bad Texter

    Hi there! This was a very powerful poem and I feel the thing that makes it so powerful is the language used. You made a very bold choice of using ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Blink and It's Gone

    Hi! This is a very interesting poem that seems to go through multiple different situations people can be in that shorten or end their life all together. That is a ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: He Kindly Stopped for Me

    Hi there! This poem is just plain pretty. The imagery and word choice used paints such an amazing mental picture for the reader that it could almost be a scene ...

    Jul 28, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Loneliness and Warmth

    Hi there! Welcome to Young Writer's Society. This was a very beautiful and poetic story and I am impressed that it this was your first piece on this website. I ...

    Jul 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost an' Found

    Hi! Holy crap, this is a fantastic piece of work. I love the concept, which hits pretty close to home. I can see this person with a wide smile, tears ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonderings

    Hi! This was a very great creative writing. I wouldn't call it a poem, because the only thing that seems to be in the form of a poem is the ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poem of Your Eyes

    Holy Moley! One of my biggest complaints with most poems is that people don't utilize the unique style of writing offered to them in poetry. You use every single bit ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bitter Candy

    Hello there! This, I feel, was a very different view on depression than what I've seen in a while. Usually something as melancholy as depression is symbolized by darkness or ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: "You're not that beautiful."

    Hello! This was a very haunting and melancholy poem and I love it! Though it's short, the punch of emotions felt from beginning to end is extremely prominent. Especially in ...

    Jun 29, 2016


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