pandoraswritings

I agree with Claudette. You give away too much stuff and don't really need to. Instead try spacing things out more. And yes, Cassandra, I think it is supposed to ...

When you say "Your no better than me", it needs to say "You're no better.." It's You are no better, not your no... Anyways, regardless of what they ^^^ say, ...

This is nice, but I'm not sure it should be written without any puncuation marks... Pandora

That was wierd. Pandora

That's funny. I couldn't stop laughing at the ham part. Genius. But if this is a script, you might want to make her actually say she is eating a ham ...

I like it. It's kind of hard to follow though. Great job. Pandora

Nice poem. It seems like you put a lot of emotion into it. PS: Your signature "Save the earth! It's to only planet with chocolate." is cute, but should "to" ...

I usually don't read sci-fi,but this was pretty good! I liked the ending. Unique Pandora

Pretty. Welocome to TYWS. Pandora

I LOVED LOVED LOVED two lines in particular. First, "But I say it jumped" and second "If it is a stubborn nut". AMAZING. And this is overall a good poem. ...

Okay, wow, this was long. Try putting it into a few bulletions, part one, two three. Pandora Oh and welcome to TYWS!

I liked most of it, a few lines, I thought, weren't as good, but still very nice. Pandora

I liked this one. It was well written and although you did not use larger words, it fit well. Great job! Pandora

I don't really like this. The words are all very small and very elementary. It has emotion, which many poems don't have, which is a plus, but it lacks diction. ...

I really didn't like this. How is ther a zoo in your head, how is there a wardrobe? I understand tears unshed and laughter, but this is confusing. Pandora