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Hi there : ) Really great chapter! I found a couple of mistakes, though, and since you've already gotten pretty detailed responses on your plot from other reviewers, I'll just ...

Hi Leahweird : ) Great story! I just have a couple of grammar mistakes to point out: Although he felt he would be more comfortable with an actual destination in ...

Hi! First off, this was amazing! I really loved it. You had so much depth in here and the way you presented everything was brilliant. Alas, I did find some ...

Hey Micman! Here's what I've got to say after reading your piece: First: I'm sorry to say that, after scrolling down to check the length of this story, I nearly ...

all honesty, I thought this was fantastic. Really, one of the best short story romances I've read in a long time. Congrats! :D Here's the stuff I really struggled to ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS :3 If you need anything, feel free to ask okay? Anyway, here's what I've got: I couldn’t look at her or anyone. This is just me, ...

Hi! First off, I'm really sorry that I dont have any criticisms to offer ^^; It's not my habit to just offer praises without at least some advice, but I ...

Hi! Sorry it took me soo long to get to this but I haven't had the chance until now. But, here I am now so let's see what you got ...

Hey Amon! Frist off, great story. At first, it seemed a bit cliche but the whole thing with Veronica fixed that and really captured my attention. Plus, the whole creepy ...

First off, wow. This was amazing. I really couldn't find that many errors at all. Here are the few ones that I did though: One: It has come to this ...

First off, amazing work! I really enjoyed reading this. Here are the few things I noticed though: Nitpicks: One: no human would understand me, yet somehow, i have to love ...

Well, I'm not sure if you want any nitpiks since you're not going to revise this, but I'm going to add them in just in case K? Nitpicks: There aren't ...

Hi! K, here's what I noticed: One: It was warm summer night when I saw my first Lycan. I was working in my dad’s pub helping clean up after everyone ...

Hi there! Here's what I found: Nitpicks: First: He laughed and gave me his schedule. I stared down at it. We had three classes together, including science, which happened to ...

Hi! Well, there really isn't much here to review so sorry if this is pretty short. I have always gotten ahead of myself, to get to the exciting stuff you ...