originalhobbit

This is very nice. I can definitely relate to the emotion in the poem. It seems very genuine and realistic. Great use of emotion.

I like the shortness of this, I feel like it helps with the imagery and the whole concept of the poem.

Thanks for the great reviews and advice, like I said, this poem was just free writing, so I didn't expect a good response.

This was awesome. It made me laugh, especially Harry's deadly monologue. The funniest part, though, was Voldemort teasing Ron about sleeping with a dude for three years(maybe even longer).

This is actually pretty good for someone who doesn't write poetry, I like it.

This is a really good poem. The imagery you used is wonderful, and I felt invested in the poem. My favorite line: "They are as clear as the honest reflection ...

this poem is really cute and fun. I know the feeling of having a pencil elude me in moments of great inspiration. Keep up the good work.

this is pretty good, I liked the imagery.

I loved the last stanza, this poem was very good, but the last stanza was probably the best part.

This is an interesting poem, I like it, for the most part, but something about it doesn't sit well with me...I'm not sure what it is. Maybe that's what you ...

This poem actually reminded me of a song I heard a long time ago. I don't really remember the title of the song, but this is very similar. Anyway, I ...

I agree with snoink, you're first two lines were awesome, but I liked the rest as well. This is a great poem, with great imagery in the first lines.

I thought this was really funny. I don't agree at all with the people who said it was bad.

I really like this poem. The rhyming is fantastic and it doesn't feel forced at all. I also like the overall flow. Anyway, this is a really good poem, and ...

This reminds of poems I used to write about several "friends" of mine. I can really identify with the anger presented in this.