originalhobbit

Make no mistake when you attempt to Gouge out our tongues For each one is a Thousand tongues of fire. So we shall summon the scorch of the Hyena of ...

This was better than I thought it would be, a lot better. I like that the theme was realization instead of jealousy and paranoia. Sometimes, the realization that someone has ...

This is great, it totally made my day. I love how cocky Harry is, and how the posts are in chronological order, it's a nice touch. My favorite post has ...

I like how, in the beginning of the story, Jesus actually does come off as creepy. I think this was a really creative story. I just have one nitpicky thing ...

This has a really great message and I think this problem needs to be addressed more. That being said, I have to agree with the reviewers above and the changes ...

This is really creative and funny, very entertaining. I like how direct it is, how it addresses the reader. The concept is also really unique, I've actually never seen a ...

Normally, I don't like things that are overly wordy, but I really liked this. The first stanza is especially good, I like that it uses humor to sort of lighten ...

This is pretty good, I like how it is written. It's very relatable, I'm pretty sure at one point or another, someone has had the idea of tolerance forced upon ...

Good poem, excellent twist. I can honestly say I did not see that one coming, even if I may have felt the same way about my Internet connection before. Onto ...

It was a good poem, but a few times, I felt it was a little petty. Also, it couldn't really hurt to tone down the hypocrisy, just a little. I ...

I really like this. I like how the narrator brings up the chemo casually, like her disease isn't what defines her, but just something she lives with. If that's what ...

I really like this poem, it has a really unique style to it that I haven't seen much. It's really interesting, and reads more like a story than a poem, ...

I agree the the posts above, the poem should be a little more descriptive. Less sentence fragments in the poem would be nice, in my opinion. Overall, it's pretty good, ...