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This poem is simplistic and I enjoy the message you're trying to send with it. You are attempting to place others into your shoes. Personally I think the photographs take ...

First may I say I very much enjoyed this poem. The use of an extended metaphor for the chrysanthemum seeds and death is rather clever and draws in the readers ...

I like the repetition you used here, with the repeated "I hate you." It gives the song a more bitter tone, as if the person you're directing it at is ...

This poem is a bit confusing and contradictory, as I read it I feel the pain in the beginning, and in the end the joy for having the pain. As ...

Hi there, Okay, I really like the way this is written even if I don't like the way some of it was done. I really liked the use of dictionary ...

Hi there, I'm gonna try and review this for you. First don't let anyone ever tell you your poem is too short, there is no such thing. A poem is ...

Hi there, Okay, first, I'm not good at reviews and I'll just point out to you what I think you've done well and what could be changed. I am not ...

First can I just say wow. This is a beautiful poem that took my breath away, its perfectly versed and amazingly written. I cannot help but think its perfect, there ...

This is very well versed and written. I really enjoy the rhythm you've established and how the lines read. I think you could improve it a bit, first with some ...

Okay, first, this is not a poem, a poem is organized into stanzas or at least broken up. This is a paragraph. Second, its skips around so much you become ...

Might I first say that I enjoy this piece quite a bit. It's beautifully versed and the rhythm fits perfectly. The imagery you used is striking and detailed, creating vivid ...

Honestly this is a poem, straight out. It's short and simple and to the point. It has a few issues I would like to address, first, the lack of grammar ...

Hi there, Well I'll say this, you were quick and to the point. I like the picture you painted, with both good and bad. As well you created a good ...

Hi there, This poem is very captivating in its images and its meaning. It is arranged perfectly. The only thing I find issue with is the rhythm. For me I ...

Hi there, I find this piece to be quite beautiful and breathtaking in its simplicity. One line that struck a chord for me was, "A silent scream is being sung." ...