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I love the last stanza its my favorite one !!! I love how you word things to and use good imagery in it. Your really good the poem isdark sad ...

I love the last stanza its my favorite one !!! I love how you word things to and use good imagery in it. Your really good the poem isdark sad ...

Wow! I really like ut veru strong for a first piece . I really like the concept and meaning ifbthe poem .the only thing i really hav negative well suggestion ...

I simply jus love it im not even goin to say anythin about grammar punctuation or nonr of that this poem is so relatable and I love the concept of ...

I loved it and the concept of it Great flow and grammar I really hope to see more of ur work Keep writing Plz if u dnt mine go check ...

Thxz

Thxz

Lol its jus fun chill

Lol well this is my own piece but anyway I like the concept but I think I couldve done way better seems lik im missing something idk but I jus ...

Hiya im not here to point out any of your flaws onlybthe good in your poem .I personaly like the length of it bc I write so little also just ...

Thxz

Thxz

Its ok I dnt hav much but ill still lik to giv u sum lol n u can always share lol jk by far I dnt want ur points

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I love the poem how real it is and how its like a movie u get a warning before watching it its jus like a little form of a warning ...

Ik about my mistakes n I really fixed them but ig it didnt save wen I dud it but thxz for the review n I will donate points my not ...