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This was good. I'm not just saying that. I loved the ending. There were a few things that confused me though: And yield grapes, I didn't get that one. Also, ...

I love this. So much. It makes me want to call my best friend and read it out loud while laughing. It's sincere and very genuine. I actually love the ...

Your haiku are nice, but the fact that you use a first person point of view in them lessens the quality of the haiku, for me. Furthermore, haiku are generally ...

I found this very strange. It was not my cup of tea in any way. You also forgot your capital letters. So, the review: The dinosaur explored the forest I ...

I like this. It's nostalgic in the right amount, and the descriptions are really good. I don't have anything to critisize. Oh the only thing that bugged me was that ...

I love this. This is really, really good. Great job on the descriptions. I just can't find anything wrong with it, so I'm going to point out all of my ...

Hello there. So, first off, I like this. The rest will be pretty harsh, but I've got praise at the end, so read on. I thought this was... nice. Very ...

I don't quite understand the first line. "I was three years dead, but it told a tale" what does "it" refer to? as for the rest of the song, what ...

I know you already got a lot of reviews, but I couldn't help myself. This was really good. I liked it a lot. Well, anyways, as long as you fix ...

I like this so much! This was written very, very well. The only thing that bugged me was: [quote] move anywhere that allows you a spare minute to inspect yourself. ...

This was very good. There were places where the rhymes might be a bit awkward - but if you write this as a song then it wouldn't matter, because you ...

There isn't much to say except I really did like it. I thought we heard the narriater more than the little girl herslef; as in, the song is about her, ...

I liked this very very much. Your words were meaningful and deep. The only thing that bothered me was that this would be hard to sing, most likely - there ...

Well, Fixed already did all of your typeos... so that's that in that department. I can't really critisize anything but that, yes, it could be a song, it would actually ...

This was pretty nice. I got a clear sense of your Mc, though I'm not sure if she's a little kid or a teenager - most adults don't think the ...