octopi

thank you guys! yeah, I know this isn't the most edited, sophisticated, or....great....poem ever, but it's true ^.^ This actually was what I was like chatting my crush on facebook, ...

This poem/lyrics *forgot to look at genre tag* is awesome! I love the flow of it. I don't know if it is lyrics, but I could really picture a tune ...

I feel privelledged to be the first one to like and comment on this :D This is really amazing! I love the concept of it, the writing is amazing, and...and....I ...

This poem kind of takes me in circles, in a way, when you start talking about putting iron in your pockets so the fairies don't take you away, but that ...

This is very simple, yet beautiful. It left me wanting more, mostly because I really liked it, and partly because I don't know how to reveiw four lines xD But ...

whoa. this is a very intense poem, with a very intense theme. It has a grim and dark mood but an undertone of sadness and hearbreak. I don't read these ...

this is an amazing piece, I'll start with this. I love the concept, and you are an excellent writer/poet. there are two things, though, that I feel I should point ...

This is very interesting! It has a neat feeling to it. I like the reocurring (however you spell that) metaphor "lonely as a cloud". It gives me the image of ...

it took me a moment to realize why there was no text, but now I finally understand XD this is very creative!

This is a very cool short story! I love the concept, it seems like something I would write myself ;) I can really feel the love Tobias portrays towards Vivian, ...

very interesting! It really makes you think. I love the last two lines, although I love all of it, too ;) One thing, though, is the font is a bit ...

This is breathtaking! I love how it's done in the mirror's POV, it's very original. Your description really pulls me in, I can imagine the witch perfectly, and everything about ...