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Re: I don't know...
hey I enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern being four lines then two that ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: Eclipse
hey i enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern with your rhymes being four lines ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: Reflections of a Leaf in Winter
This poem was very enjoyable! The theme of this poem was quite meaningful and it remained consistent throughout the whole poem. The first thing is that I believe adding stanzas ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: i am no poet
Hey this is really beautiful and nice poem. I must say that you have the potential to express yourself correctly with such a simple and understanding vocabulary. I believe that ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: Sweets
HEY, i am glad to read such a nice and sweet poem.... i would like to tell you that you have written beautiful poem and you expressed the emotions really ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: Free
Hey..... nice way to present your thoughts and feeling which you have experienced...... I am glad that you explained your feelings in such a brief that usually takes paragraphs to ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Sanctuary
HEY.... its a sweet and simple poem... short and expressed well... it is more like a description about how you feel and what you feel?? i love the poem and ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Boy of my dreams
HEY.... this is a beautiful piece of work. i loved it. i really like the work which is associated to love and affection. i must say that you know that ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Joy
HEY.... you wrote well. i wish to see more expressive words and a bit of details too. it is a beautiful piece of work but looks incomplete. hope you are ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: I Need Hope
HEY, you expressed yourself well. i just wish to give you an advice, and apologize if you felt it wrong, i just want to say that try not to write ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Poor Girl
HEY.... you wrote an amazing poem!! I loved the way you portrayed a girl who has to do those things which she does not want do. I have felt that ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: Untitled WIP - Prologue
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Mar 5, 2016
HEY You wrote your words very wisely and am happy for the fact that your words made imagine each thing......... Everyone should write in a way that it should make ... -
Re: When the Balcony Collapses
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Jan 19, 2016
HEY You wrote your words very wisely and am happy for the fact that your words made imagine each thing......... Everyone should write in a way that it should make ... -
Re: Be Gentle
HEY dear you seem to be really feared in this poem..... it is nice but I would rather suggest you to not write negative as I am a psychology student ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Summer Irony
HEY i really like this poetry as it seems that you really wanted to write something on nature.... i appreciate the fact that you initiated in a beautiful manner.... like ...
Nov 30, 2015
