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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I don't know...

    hey I enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern being four lines then two that ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Eclipse

    hey i enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern with your rhymes being four lines ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Reflections of a Leaf in Winter

    This poem was very enjoyable! The theme of this poem was quite meaningful and it remained consistent throughout the whole poem. The first thing is that I believe adding stanzas ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i am no poet

    Hey this is really beautiful and nice poem. I must say that you have the potential to express yourself correctly with such a simple and understanding vocabulary. I believe that ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sweets

    HEY, i am glad to read such a nice and sweet poem.... i would like to tell you that you have written beautiful poem and you expressed the emotions really ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Free

    Hey..... nice way to present your thoughts and feeling which you have experienced...... I am glad that you explained your feelings in such a brief that usually takes paragraphs to ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Sanctuary

    HEY.... its a sweet and simple poem... short and expressed well... it is more like a description about how you feel and what you feel?? i love the poem and ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Boy of my dreams

    HEY.... this is a beautiful piece of work. i loved it. i really like the work which is associated to love and affection. i must say that you know that ...

    Apr 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Joy

    HEY.... you wrote well. i wish to see more expressive words and a bit of details too. it is a beautiful piece of work but looks incomplete. hope you are ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Need Hope

    HEY, you expressed yourself well. i just wish to give you an advice, and apologize if you felt it wrong, i just want to say that try not to write ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Fantasy Re: Poor Girl

    HEY.... you wrote an amazing poem!! I loved the way you portrayed a girl who has to do those things which she does not want do. I have felt that ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Untitled WIP - Prologue

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    HEY 
You wrote your words very wisely and am happy for the fact that your words made imagine each thing......... Everyone should write in a way that it should make ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When the Balcony Collapses

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    HEY You wrote your words very wisely and am happy for the fact that your words made imagine each thing......... Everyone should write in a way that it should make ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Be Gentle

    HEY dear you seem to be really feared in this poem..... it is nice but I would rather suggest you to not write negative as I am a psychology student ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer Irony

    HEY i really like this poetry as it seems that you really wanted to write something on nature.... i appreciate the fact that you initiated in a beautiful manner.... like ...

    Nov 30, 2015


It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
— Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey