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nishthabawa2896

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ch:- You are adorable!

    Some stories makes you to read them over and over again with that same enthusiasm. I felt the same in this. I could visualize the entire scenario as if happening ...

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Twice a soul

    hey salander! I must say that you write really deep...…….. I got little lost in the poem and felt amazing. keep it up, you write really well. I would love ...

    Jan 30, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Drifting

    I extremely experience the redundancy of the chorale. Its extremely delightful, similar to the slant of the lyric. I can truly feel your affection and it is contacting. Be that ...

    Nov 21, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Double Meaning/P.J.D.L.M.A

    Hey writer Not so much certain if this is the conventional method to audit things, so endure me on the off chance that it sounds somewhat irritating. Verse is a...strange ...

    Nov 21, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: you'd think.

    hey writer I must say that you have put great efforts in keeping all the thoughts in right place. I just wanna give you a little suggestion, though you have ...

    Nov 21, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Please Change

    hey I love the things in the poem and keep writing.

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the art of letting go - pt.1 (spoken word)

    hey keep writing I love your work

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: In vacuo

    hey thanks for a lovely work. keep writing.

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: with love comes strange feelings.

    hey I loved it just never cease. keep writing.

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Her Heart

    hey I loved it keep writing

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "Kryptonite Inside"

    hey keep writing

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Hard Life

    hey I really love the way you express yourself. keep writing always.

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just Write

    hey I really liked your work, I just wanna say that "The best way to not feel hopeless is to get up and do something. Don’t wait for good things ...

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: red seas

    Hey This poem is quite short and lacks much depth, but it has potential. You have the idea in your mind and in your description. All you have to do ...

    Oct 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Raindrops

    hey its a beautiful piece of work I appreciate your creativity and I really enjoyed this while looking and reading. I wish you could have add some more lines to ...

    Oct 28, 2016


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