ninjawaffles

Hello! Ninjawaffles here! I really like the message of your poem. There are just a few things that I would like to point out. There are some punctuation errors (like ...

Hello! Ninjawaffles here!! I really like the topic of your poem and your writing style is nice, too. I am here just to give a few suggestions on what you ...

Hello! Ninjawaffles here! I really like the feel of your poem. There isn't that much to be picky about but I can make some suggestions. "I thought they were candies, ...

Hello! Ninjawaffles here! This is a short nice poem but there are some little things that I would like to point out. (I have to be picky alright :3) "The ...

Wow, this is an amazing poem. It's funny, deep and moving. The imagery is phenomenal and the metaphors are very, very nice. (As you can see I have a thing ...

Hello! Ninjawaffles here! Your poem is very good. There is just a couple of things I would like to point out. In the first stanza, in the second line, the ...

Hello! Ninjawaffles here! I love your poem! It's so sad, it bring tears to my eyes but I loved this poem. I could easily picture all the events passing by ...

Hello! Ninjawaffles here! I really, really loved your poem and the feeling it gave me sent shivers up and down my spine! There is only one thing that might just ...

Hello! Ninja here! Usually I do a lot of criticizing but this time, I can honestly say that this poem is one of the best I've read. The whole cold ...

Hello! Ninja here! I'm just going to point out (and be picky) about some things that have caught my eye and that I think you should work on. I like ...

Hello! Ninja here! I really like the message you're trying to get at in this poem. I'm here just to try and give you a bit to think about, but ...

Lol at the last two lines. This poem has a meaning that I really like. The only thing that I'm going to be nit-picky about is that: 'The scribbles across ...

Hello! This poem has a very nice message. I like what you're trying to get across. Just a few tiny things to mention: 'Not even if your dead' the "your" ...

This is a very nice poem. I really like the way you have made this whole poem into a kind of metaphor (if I am correct). The only part that ...

The feeling of this poem is nice. I like how you incorporate rhyming at some points of the poem and I also like the different types of metaphors you add ...