niichan

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Word choice, mood and voice influence the tone of this poem but a meter would help set the pace to support the underlying tone. For example, a melancholy or moody ...

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If you are writing a poem in a standard form such as a sonnet, your choices about line length are somewhat restricted by the rules of the form. But you ...

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Free verse ( which I’m assuming is what you were writing) is not poetry without form or rules. The final form is not what makes it a poem; it is ...

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Your poem is short, so I wouldn’t much recommend rhythming ( by rhythming I mean sing-song rhythm, sorry for not explaining o(╥﹏╥)o). I would suggest to play around with the ...

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There are five main types of beats (rhythm) take a brief look at each type. In poetry, rhythm is expressed through stressed and unstressed syllables.Here are the most common types ...

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Rhyme: Rhyming can help accent key words and ideas. But if rhyme is used too heavily, there is a danger that it becomes sing-song and facile. A nursery-rhyme rather than ...

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If you do choose to incorporate rhymes into your poems, be aware that there are various types of rhyming schemes. For instance, some poets prefer to have rhymes within lines ...

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Though the concept of the poem, is solid, the words simply do not flow. The rhythm is constantly broken by words that don't add to the piece or are cumbersome ...

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You can get away with less than precise expression from time to time because the story will pull the reader along. It is best to create a picture in the ...

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Repetition of words and phrases helps the poet to emphasize an important aspect of the poem. Often times, when phrases are repeated, it creates a more emotional experience for the ...

As a poet ( or writer in general ) , you want to ensure that the flow of your words is natural One of the best ways to do this ...