nightflyer

I'm not really sure what's happening in this. Some of your lines don't quite flow, like at the end of the first stanza. my hands want to move or i ...

This is an awesome poem. The way your phrases go together, but also portray the speaker. I just really love this poem. It's so unique and, for some reason, actually ...

I really love this piece. It has a special feel that makes you think when you're done with it. There were a few parts that didn't quite flow, or make ...

I loved this, for so often I, too have writers block. They rhythm was just right for me, but I will have to agree with one of the comments Hassan ...

Wow! I really like this. I don't think I can stress that enough. The emotion in it, and the words you used really drew this together. It portrayed a soul ...

This is a great piece of work. I'm already waiting for what will come next. The conversation in her head was a little weird and confusing, but the gist of ...

I really loved this. The structure, the words used, and the rhyming. This is just the thing that i'm interested in, so of course i loved it. I could really ...

Wow this was very emotional. You are already one step ahead of others because if you can put your feelings into your writing it makes it just so much of ...

You seemed to keep repeating "This is awkward" a lot more than just a couple times. I really have no idea what the genre is going to be about nothing ...

Wow, i really felt the depth there. The ending was superb. Never fails, always and forever. I love it when writers end with something meaning full or deep. I definitely ...

I could really feel the pain and agony that the character must have been experiencing. It sounded like the character had finally hit the braking point after a long time ...