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Great job! I really liked this except it got me tongue tied. The rhyming was to forced. Manay good poems do not rhyme! Anyway, great job....

more, more and MORE!!! btw, i loved it

LOVE IT!!! I really don't know about the title and I agree with what Nate said. I demand more!! LOL

I absolutely love it... I wanted to read some more of your writing, Bubble and found this:) Excellent

good in a kid sort of way...you need a title

*evil laugh* i loved it...fascinatingly evil...lol

very well written! I loved it... no crit, sorry

Very good..There could be a bit more meaning, but nevertheless, good

I absolutely loved this. You guys really wrote a great poem here. I loved it, so no criticism. It was perfect. Nikki

interesting... Out of curiousity, do you agree or disagree with the death penalty? Very well written paper, very informative. Do you happen to know if they still use the electric ...

I really love your poetry! This was shorter, so it kept my interest and I raelly liked it... Srry, no criticism..

I really understand how hard this poem must have been for you to write. It was very well written and besdes the other comments, I don't have much to say ...

I know that it is still a first draft and all, but does anyone have suggestions to fix it?? I am brain dead...Will look at it again in the morning...

this was a really an amazing poem... i love this word choice in this, esoeciaally the comparison of your tendons becoming wires and bones becoming a fear. You really made ...

with all of your comments about my weak poetry on topics that had been used hundredsof times, i tried something a little bit different and i liked the result better, ...