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Re: The day the Gods were dead
Your poem was very beautiful and meaningful. I love your use of vocabulary and imagery to describe the surroundings. I believe your poem encompasses the meaning of how gruesome, deadly, ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Armageddon's Woman: Intro Table Contents Chapter One: Graduation and Apparition
This seems like a very interesting story. I loved the vocabulary you used that contributed to a great understanding in your story. I love dystopia stories and your use of ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: A Slow Death
Wow this is incredible! It is also really cool that you wrote something as beautiful as this, with the vocabulary you did and you're only 13! I feel like that ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: La Pumpa!
I can relate to this because I have asthma as well. I wish my poetry was as great as yours I love the metaphors you created, the vocabulary you used ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: Miserable Minutes
This is very short and depressing. I can't help but think that you wrote this possibly with inspiration from your own life which is very upsetting. I am so sorry ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: Perfect girl
That is the sweetest thing to write a poem for your girlfriend!! Like that's goals I need a partner to do that for me! Your poem is so sweet and ...
Jan 15, 2018 -
Re: Durante Vita
I absolutely love this! I’ve always been obsessed with reading historical fiction books like the Dear America series. The civil war area was a depressing era in American history. The ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: Haunting Home
I love your writing style! It's humorous and flows well so it is easy to read. You are also really good at summarizing what happened. A lot of events happened ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: The Kids Aren't Alright
Wow! I can't even begin to describe how much this poem means to me. I am a closeted bisexual who recently came out to my mom, the only family member ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: Demons of Darkness
I battle with depression as well as it is a hard fight. Depression truly does feel like your being controlled by a dark force. I literally have no suggestions the ...
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: Insane
This was freakin amazing! I love suspense and physcological thrillers. I love your creepy bloody descriptions it seems like this isn’t your first go around with this genre haha. Having ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: The Swan Goddess
This poem is kickbutt as heck and feminist oh my geez. This poem reminds me of the gracefulness of figure skaters and ballerinas. I think this poem addresses the beauty ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: The View Of A Cat
I FREAKIN LOVE THIS!!! im a huge cat lady i have two of my own and i thought this was absolutely adorable! i actually do listen to sounds of cats ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Coma
Your writing is so compelling and descriptive. I feel like I’m right there experiencing what happened. I love the intro and the brief backstory. The only criticism I would give ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Remember When
This is my first review so please don’t review my review haha jk. I love poetry and I love the romantic genre. This poem was stunning! I loved the subtle ...
Jan 9, 2018
