neptune

Exciting! I%u2019ll read it when it comes out!

Please do! I%u2019d love to read and review more of your chapters!

Ahh, okay! That makes sense about the italics (I kind of figured that, but I wasn%u2019t sure) so thank you for clarifying! Your points are completely valid and I understand ...

Thank you for your response! I can dm you later (would love to hear the full explanation) but I%u2019m glad my time/pacing feedback was helpful!

I'm sorry if I didn't make myself clear in my review -- I do know that this was a persona you used. I try to imply that 'you' is the ...

Sure thing! Thank you. (And I don't think it was a real word, just one in a minor dictionary website, haha).

Your welcome! Glad this review helped!

Your welcome! I'm glad. :D

As far as mentioning the reason for separation -- I don't quite know. I would say describe it slightly but don't force it onto paper. I think what I'm trying ...

Oh, haha.

Oh, cool! And you can tag me. :)

Your welcome! And it's okay, haha!

thank you! i knew i was missing some sort of imagery, but i didn't really know what to branch out on. this really helped, thank you for contributing your feedback!

when using quotation marks, usually i will put the question mark, period, comma, exclamation mark (or whatever is used) before the ending quotation mark. this is because i am/write in ...