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Hey there, Junel! I will be reviewing your short today! Let’s dive right in, then! :D Before I start, I have a quick idea/theory. Wouldn’t it be interesting to see ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your poem today -- so let's hop right in! :D I see you're trying to use rhyme throughout this whole poem, in an ABAB pattern, ...

Hello, Radrook! Let's dive into the review! :D From the start I could tell right away that you knew what you were writing about -- you definitely planned this well ...

Hey, SpaceSnickerdoodle! Let's get right on in to this review! :D Overall, not a very nice concept. Not a fan of this sentence :/ Maybe just the wording? It needs ...

Hello, speakerskat! Let's dive into the review. This poem was such a great idea! Never seen anything like it. The one thing, though, is that it was very quick and ...

Hello, LordTachanka! Let's dive right into this review! I see you are writing about something very common -- writer's block and overthinking about what is being written. Now, though I ...

Hello, Rosella. I'll be reviewing your poem today, so let's get right into it! I can tell this piece is very close to you and matters a lot, so I ...

Hello, Flumadiddle! I'll be reviewing this for you today, so let's just go ahead and dive right in! I love the acrostic poem idea! The issue with the lettering, however, ...

Hello! Let's dive right into this review. Ahh, the topic of love. So commonly it is written into poetry and songs. Which makes me feel like this could deserve a ...

Hello! Let's dive right into this review. I never did anything to deserve this. Is "this" referring to life? Or something else? It would be nice if you were more ...

Hello there! I will be reviewing your work today! ;) First of all, thank you for posting your work here. It was very honest and I think we can all ...

Hello there! I will be reviewing your haiku today. What a cute little piece. When I first read the beginning line, it felt like a common, hackneyed sentence. Haikus are ...

Hello TheBlueCat! I'll be reviewing your work for today. Thank you for sharing it. This poem was cute. I loved how it was a small tribute to the site. It ...

Hello Ella! I'll be reviewing your work today. :D Before I begin to suggest better alternatives and revisions I think could be made to this, I would love to point ...

Hello, @Empires! What an interesting piece. There is a very minimal amount of what I may suggest to edit or look to change, but hopefully this review will be somewhat ...