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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Fear of the Water

    Wooow, this is incredibly well written. In the first four paragraphs you had me little confused whether there is a third person involved in this dying or burned out relationship; ...

    Apr 4, 2022
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Positive.

    Hello Sofie, this is a very nice story, I liked it a lot! It absorbed me instantly and I red it in one breath which is a sign it is ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I was Late to Work Today

    Hello Mooilky, this is my two cents/little review. :-) First of, I would like to say, I really enjoyed your poem. I think it is a really nice work, I ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: betrayal

    I really love your poem. It seems to indicate that the betrayal came out of the blue and hit you pretty hard. "It was a drenching rain in clearest sky ...

    Feb 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: i told him

    Hello FireEyes, I really like the story you're telling here. As I see it, you desribe a guy, who is/was your dear friend and because he found out that you ...

    Feb 11, 2022
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: The Untold Stories Behind The Scars - 2

    Here is a little review of your story (both parts actually). This is definitely a strong story you are telling, well written and easy to follow (I mean that it ...

    Feb 9, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Madness

    This is a really nice poem. I love the melody and the general feeling of it. I guess it portrays a person who today's society calls a "highly sensitive person"? ...

    Feb 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Long Way To Go

    Wow, I cannot believe there is no review of this yet. I am sorry that the first one is gonna be from a total amateur and on top of that ...

    Feb 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​a raging sea

    This is a very interesting and beautiful piece. Makes me wonder about a type of relationship you're desribing. Amorous, obviously :-), but also a bit destructive - mentioning a "raging ...

    Feb 7, 2022


I would rather die of passion than of boredom.
— Émile Zola