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Hi, Zizi16! I did really enjoy this poem. I like the concept. If I had to really leave any "criticism," I personally probably would have used some type of punctuation ...

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Do you happen to have the other chapters in full on your computer? Because I don't really check this website much away from my home computer, and I would love ...

Thank you so much! I actually sat at my laptop for a half hour with my cursor over the submit button because I feel this is one of my worst. ...

Thank you! I really don't focus on the layout of my poetry too much usually. Maybe I will have to look into it a little. Nick.

It took me forever to play around with the shape of this on the editor. It's so much easier to shape on Microsoft word than it is here :')

Thank you. Believe it or not, this lass actually occurred 14 years ago. I tried to convey it through my language as if it had happened yesterday. Nick.

Nick here to write a review! At first I thought this was just going to be another short love poem. It is indeed love poetry but it is in no ...

Really?! I had a feeling I was okay at writing poetry, but I didn't think people would respond this well to it. Writing poetry is my passion and I guess ...

While I'll admit, it took me a while to get into this one, I did. The repetition of "field" early on in the poem worked. The short, to-the-point lines worked. ...

While I'll admit, it took me a while to get into this one, I did. The repetition of "field" early on in the poem worked. The short, to-the-point lines worked. ...

Reading this poem haunted me, and in a good way. The imagery utilized was beautiful and succinct to the point. I needed to read this, as I feel this is ...

I liked reading this poem and had fun while reading it. I like the use of the colors and the fact that you touched a serious topic with some fun ...

Thank you so much! This is a new area for me since I typically write about more upbeat things, and I'm glad to see that most people are responding to ...

I can't thank you enough for that! Poetry is my passion and to know that I'm not doing too bad at it makes me smile. Thank you! :)