There comes a moment
Where a vital choice
is made:
.
Learning to Love:
Loving
Learning to Befriend: :
Befriending
Learning to Encourage:
Encouraging
Learning to Help:
Helping
Learning to Love:
Loving
.
OR
.
Learning to Hate:
Hating
Learning to Bully:
Bullying
Learning to Destroy:
Destroying
Learning to Hurt:
Hurting
Learning to Hate:
Hating
. .
It's a sharp dichotomy,
A difficult choice,
But it cannot be
Unlearned.
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Wow look at that formatting! The poem in itself is great; the layout is just the icing on the cake for me. It holds a simplistic beauty of the brutal truth mankind holds dear. It shows both the beauty and kindness we are capable of as well as the dark destructive side to humans we simply chose not to see. The formatting must have really been difficult but I applaud the effort. Overall I think it was truly beautiful.
Thank you so much! I actually sat at my laptop for a half hour with my cursor over the submit button because I feel this is one of my worst. But the formatting did take forever. I think I sat here close to an hour tweaking it.
I really really like the design, first off. It must have taken you quite a while to make this as perfectly shaped as it is. It reminds me of a leaf, floating down across my screen! HA!
"Dichotomy" was a word I had never seen nor heard ever, so I had to look it up. Thanks for helping me learn something new.
Your language choice was very artistic. I have to praise you for that! It had a simple concept that was straight to the point and hit hard, and I appreciated the work overall. I hope you submit much more in the future.
It took me forever to play around with the shape of this on the editor. It's so much easier to shape on Microsoft word than it is here :')