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wow, she is an idiot but i do feel for her, i am so useed to long novels so i just expected some kind of rescue operation but i realised ...

this is very good. at points i catch glimpses of one thing and then its gone. its so hard to determine what it is you are talking about. everything is ...

This is very good for the most part, i like the fact that too much is never revealed, it allows the reader to make many interpretations and thus link it ...

Hey first all i have to say is that you need to proof read your work, there are quite a lot of spelling errors, of course you can spell but ...

This is quite amazing, I agree with previous comment, you have written this is so great that i think music would be good with it. Considering the trash people call ...

lol, I like this, its very wierd though, correct me if i am wrong but she did transform right. there were odd details i couldn't make sense of but it ...

I don't knwo what to make of this. I don't get in the least. It literally feels like you wrote down what you dreamed. becuase everyone moves from one thing ...

I don't what to make of this. I felt at different times as if it was targeting different things. I think thats great. Poetry is good when its broad and ...

a very nice poem. i like how to the very end you never mentioned any specific details. I had my fingers crossed. If you had it would immediately taken away ...

a very nice poem. i like how to the very end you never mentioned any specific details. I had my fingers crossed. If you had it would immediately taken away ...

A very dark and forboding poem that probably has exaggerated the soon to be effects of global warming. Of course you have gone and made it into a natural effect ...

Its so simple and beautiful. I like how you considered every motive of the rose and spoke as if you were the rose. It reallt makes it different to how ...

another great chapter, seriously, i am telling you, there needs to be more, i am just not getting anough out of this. Damn i hate that man, he really p***es ...

I laughed at the end. It just turned itno something so ridiculously funny. I am so sorry if that was not your intention. That man is is hilarious. He thinks ...

Wow, reading through it I felt disapointed for most of it. Then the ending snapped me into a fan. Everything amde sense. At the start reading through I was confused ...