mystiquevander

I love the imagery in this poem, it really took me far! I can tell this was written with a more surreal touch than most pieces, and I enjoyed it ...

Hey there Forestqueen808, This poem when I read it seemed like a good start. It has a great fundamental subject matter, time, but I felt detatched when I read it ...

Wow. I really, really liked this piece! It was fresh and something unique, especially the formating of it. I'm always scared to do something a little different when it comes ...

I really enjoyed this poem, here's a star! ^_^ I liked how it flowed, it was very well done and obviously thought out. You can feel the emotion in it ...

Hey there Ian, how are you doing? I see you're quite new here so welcome. =) (I'm still kinda new myself) For a kid your age, this is a good ...

Hey there WaitingForLife, how are you? First let me start by saying you are an intriguing writer who really captivated me with this piece in the sense that I found ...

I like the subject matter for this poem, and I was going to throw in a few edits but it seems as though shiney1 already beat me to it! I ...

Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes of cigarettes and cheap perfume. Perhaps we should not dance tonight, lose ourselves in pulsing ...

I really like this! One of the best poems I've read recently. I don't have anything to really critique on it. Other than just throwing it out there that the ...

Hrm...I like this piece a lot. At first I didn't, but then I did. Kind of like how you like it and how you also don't like it. I'm not ...

My Garden I wander through this endless garden; Giant, fuzzy bumble bees buzz by me. Flowers flop happily as I push passed them, Their sweet fragrance fills the air. I ...

Wow. I really can't say much else. This was extremely powerful, I really liked how you structured it. Very well worded, and I am highly impressed. Definitely looking forward to ...

This is quite the fantastic start with lovely imagery, really grasps ahold of ones imagination. There are punctuation mishaps, but overlooking that and its disjointed lines I found it a ...

May I start by saying that this poem was good. It is slightly disorganized with punctuation and grammar mistakes, but the visualization you seemed to have used is refreshing. However, ...

A sweet, pitiful face is what they all see, Consider changing it to 'is all that they see' I know the awful truth. Behind that mask, Lies the face of ...