myjaspercat

Hello lylavarious Myjaspercat here for your review, Ok, I have to say this caught my eye when I read the description and still when I read the first line. Good ...

Hello Mudthicket, Myjaspercat here for your review So first of all, I want to say that the concept of love in poetry is rather cliché. As well, I want to ...

Hello Cristoffergarcia, Myjaspercat here for your review So I think that this poem is fairly ok, a I think that it can be so much more. I don't like the ...

Hello mephistophelesangel, Myjaspercat here for your review. First thing I want to say is that this is rather long. Maybe next time you could split something like this into two ...

Hello Onethousandrums, Myjaspercat here for your review, Ok, so despite what Burrow said below, I am going to jump out on a limb and review your piece here. However I ...

Hello Fallenoutofgrace, Myjaspercat here for your review I loved this poem, I think that it is very well written and some of the best poetry I have read in a ...

Hello Tay01, Myjaspercat here for your review First of all I like this poem and I think that it is cute. But there are a few things I want to ...

Hello CHRISSY321, Myjaspercat here for your review, Overall I thought that this poem lacked imagery and was plain in the long run. I do however like the concept behind it, ...

Hello Nightshade21, Myjaspercat here for your review.... Before I start I want to say that I thought this poem was interesting. I see that you are new and all, but ...

Hello, Myjaspercat here for a review So first thing I want to say is that your poetry is fine. But I didn't really like the poem over all. I cant ...

Hello, Myjaspercat here for a review... So the first thing I want to make notice to is that I am reviewing this as a stand alone since I haven't read ...

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, Myjaspercat her for a review.... So I really liked this poem overall, I thought that it was kinda cute. My first nitpick is the beginning. I am not saying ...

Ok well, thank you for sharing your poem. First of all I thought that this poem was rather confusing. I cant really see the resemblance between an airplane and bird. ...

Ok, so overall I really liked this piece. I think that you have an amazing eye for detail and that your writing is very mature sounding. However I have a ...

I like this. To me it really seems to tap into the readers biases. Anyhow, I thought that it was well written and very strong. One question I have though ...