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Re: Whom You Belong
Hey GraceWorrior14, Myjaspercat here to review for you.... First I want to start by saying welcome to YWS, it's always a pleasure to see a new person around here. Now ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: Meditation
Hey Morrigan, Myjaspercat here to give you a review... Ok, so overall I really liked this poem. I thought that it was cute and it really captured my attention, which ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: Let Me In
Hey Scribble, Myjaspercat here to review your piece. Ghosts? Really? That's what I usually think when somebody claims to have an 'infestation'. when someone says infestation they could mean anything; ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Friend
Hey Scribble, Myjaspercat here for a review... Well first thing first, welcome to the world of poetry. That being said, your poem here seems very structurally sound there wasn't much ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Cadera (Part 1?)
Hey roeckercody, Myjaspercat here to give you a review... Wow, ok, so this piece was rather interesting. I do like the idea and I really think you should make this ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Shipwrecked
Hello anniegirl123, Myjaspercat here for a review... My head was pounding. I don’t know where I am, or how I got here but it doesn’t seem I’ll find out any ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Hello QueenAnne, Myjaspercat here for a review.... Ok, so I'm not going to say much yet. I think since these are lyrics I will just throw my self right into ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: The King
Hello EnderFlash, Myjaspercat here for a review... So I'm not going to do a line by line since there isn't much to do, more so I am just going to ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Her Last Dream
Hey Prakash, Myjaspercat here for a review for you... I want to begin with a little bit of advice. I noticed that you have a little issue with the formatting ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: The Girl with Freckles
Hey EternalRain, Myjaspercat here for your review... Ok so I see that you might have a problem with formatting since each line of your poem is separated. For a quick ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: I Wish I Was A Dog
Hello Sunset101, Myjaspercat here for a review... So I don't have much to start off with other then; lets get to it... I wish I was a dog, that would ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: Regret But No Repentence
Hello PassionateReader, Myjaspercat here for a review... So, I really like the idea of having to choose a sentence and then making it into a story. It's very clever. I ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Love Poem No. 6
Hello Morrigan, Myjaspercat here for a review... So, I'm sorry to say, but I want to start this review with the worldly advice that I give everyone else (who writes ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Random Poems by a 14 year old girl
Hey idefk480, Myjaspercat here for a review... So I want to start off by saying welcome to YWS. I cant wait to see more work and some reviews from you. ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: A Single Second
Hey Chaser, Myjaspercat here for a review... So I want to say that I really enjoyed this poem. I thought that your idea was sound and you had a very ...
Jun 29, 2015
