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Hey there gxldencrxwns, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Call me stupid for this, but even after I left her for 10 years, I still had feelings for her.  ...

Ok, well first off hey there NathanRaux, Myjaspercat her to drop you a review. So first let's talk about your poem as a whole. I typically do a line by ...

It will come as a spontaneous decision as while you lie in bed one night. You've thought about it before, of course, but you didn't think [never thought you had ...

“Pink is a distraction,” Keva thought. Just wanted to remind you that you don't need to put thoughts in quotation marks. As long as they are italicized then you're fine. ...

(Note: It has forgotten its name, so we will call it a “he” for the sake of clarity.) He wanders through a gray landscape and looks for a place he ...

At last, the school day had ended and I stretched my slender arms up and over my head to relieve the tension residing there. Ok, not bad for a start. ...

Hey there Cflorence21, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Forgive Me, I would leave off the comma here or replace it with a period, it would make the statement ...

Hey there marms, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review First of all, this was an amazing poem. In fact I don't have much to say, which is kind of ...

In which Erza is interviewed after his older brother Jasper mysteriously goes missing. Ok, so first, thank you for the information but is it absolutely necessary to include this little ...

Hey TZH, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review Through my head ..millions of thoughts run I'm going to assume that since the next word is capitalized you meant to ...

Hey there chaussettes Myjaspercat here for a review--- when he looks at me, his eyes are two overflowing tea cups and it's all spilling on me in my favorite Crayola ...

Hey lolosboing Myjaspercat here again to leave you a review-- Eyes, dazed and glossy, staring blankly across the horizon. A pale, hard face, curved and round. I would start a ...

Hey there 1swimgirl Myjaspercat here to drop a review- If you really wanted us to be friends you would come back But it's scary to think that I'm going to ...

Hey there, Aleta Myjaspercat here for a review---- In the immense pool of molds and clay, hearts and varying souls, vessels and visages, is the formula to build a human. ...

Hey there lolosboing, Myjaspercat here to give you a review Well, first of all, I really like this poem. I've never thought of life like this, and in fact I ...