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Hello there, here to review. I'd like to congratulate you because this was a very good poem and you conveyed your message with so little words. Your poem has a ...

Well, that was graphic... Hello there, I'm here to review. So, first of all I'd like to say that that story was really nasty but it was also pretty interesting. ...

Hello, here to review. First of all, I would like to say that I liked this piece a lot. However, I find it was a bit confusing and sometimes hard ...

Hello, I would like to tell you that this is a very good story, and since I enjoyed reading it I will review it. But before that, I want to ...

Hello there, First of all, I would like to tell you that this is a very good beginning to what I'm sure will be a very good story. The story ...

Helo Illuminist. This piece is excellent. I really liked everything in it. It was very interesting (although it gave me shivers.) But it is really good. Even though it is ...

Hello Wolveness. Overall, I find this pretty good (is it something that really happened to you or just a story?). Anyway, I'd like to give you some tips: First of ...

So. This is great. Terrible, but great. Only somethings are not quite correct. First of all, there's paragraphs. You did not do any paragraphs which made it a little harder ...

Hello Lili, I liked your story, but I agree that it goes a little too fast. I think you should either make the chapter longer, make two parts of the ...

Que buen poema! La verdad, yo ni leo ni escribo poesía, pero esto me encanto! Me gusta mucho como vas contra la corriente, eso es ser original. También me gusto ...

Wow! That made me feel so good at home, and I can't wait for Christmas. The last part though, that was harsh. It would be really sad burning down a ...

That was a good poem! I think that you always have to start with a capital letter when you write a new line (although I'm not sure, I don't write ...

Nice story! I liked it although I think it went very fast! You probably should have done it a bit longer. Then there are just a few mistakes that I ...

Great story! It was packed with action, and although I cannot relate the characters, I really liked it! I did feel a bit out of place when you talk about ...

Nice story! I found it really interesting, and I think you had a very good first sentence. Although, I found some mistakes that I would like to point out: She ...