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Hey there, here to review! This was a nice piece, and although long, it was good, so it was worth it. The thing I like the most about this is ...

Hello, here for a review (again). This poem is very nice. I liked how you set a very happy mood to this poem with the first verses, then made it ...

Hey there, here to review. I'd like to say that I'm not a fan of prostitute poems, but this is actually very well done. It wasn't too long, which is ...

Hello there, here to review. This was a nice poem, but it was really depressing. It looks like you don't care about life anymore (I hope that's only the poem ...

Hello there, here to review. This poem was beautiful, especially towards the end. I don't know if it is just me but I didn't know you were talking about death ...

Hello, here to review. Wow, that was a very nice start. If this is the beginning of the story, I would like to continue reading it. If not, I would ...

Hey Zolen, here to review. This is a good poem that I think fits the mood you were trying to give very well, but I still find that it is ...

Hey there, here to review. Congratulations, that was amazing for a first chapter. You entirely caught my attention and I love the way you make everything so suspenseful by not ...

Hello, here for a review. I reall liked this poem. The way it's written does seem to show the mood of a madman. And although, like FireFox said, capitalization could ...

Hi there, here to review. That was a nice poem. Even though I do not fully understand the message (there doesn't necessarily have to be one), I liked the fact ...

Hello there, here for a review. Well, let me start by saying that I was not expecting it to be written in this format. Instead of it being a story, ...

Hello, here for a review. Well, doesn't that look like just any stereotypical teen? I really liked your story, or the beginning of your story, which actually made me want ...

Hey there, here for a review. So I would like to say that this poem is nice, but I found that it got confusing at times. Although, that is probably ...

Hey there, here for a review. Well I'd like to start by saying that this is beautifully written. I love the way it rhymes and flows and there wasn't much ...

Hey there, here to review. Let me start by saying that I liked this poem. At first I thought that you didn't like winter and that your piece seemed to ...