mybrokenreality

The message you're getting across here is one that can never be said enough. I loved the way it was so simply stated. They were short lines, but powerful statements. ...

Hey Kitty :) So I like it. It helps that I can relate to your poetry. Now your style is unlike most that I've read. Its not structured the way ...

Alright, much like what Grif above me said, the capital letters were highly distracting. But before I get into that, I want to talk a little about the content. Overall, ...

Hmm...a lot of anger... Ha, but you have no idea why you were angry? Either way, good poem. Keep it up! :D ~mybrokenreality

Wow, this was great. I really connected with it. Music really is one of the greatest escapes there is, don't you think? Anyways, keep writing! :D ~mybrokenreality

Hmm...I like the storyline so far. It seems like it could develop into something interesting. Althought I do have a few comments. Now, a few grammar mistakes here and there ...

Wow...there was just so much...emotion put into this poem. I absolutely loved it. For some reason or another, these were my favorite lines: My life's been invested in your simple ...

Hmm...I really liked it in the perspective that I can relate to it. I'm not an insomniac but there are many nights when I do feel like this. It isn't ...

I basically agree with everything that Abigail pointed out. It's honestly a piece many people could relate to easily and some parts just seem to echo in my head. My ...

I really liked this poem! It reminds me of a person I used to know...she was a lot like the person you're describing here. Always enjoying life and making everyone ...

Well, to be honest, I liked it and didn't like it at the same time. For some reason the poem didn't feel like it had a very strong flow to ...

I really liked this! The way it deeply went into what determination is, and what it does really made the poem great. Everything flowed amazingly and it was just great ...

This was really awesome! I absolutely loved how you showed children as they really are, with every ounce of true innocence they have. It was truly great. It brought back ...

Well, like Flower above mentioned love poems are very common. To make one stand out you really need to work at it so when your audience reads it, it'll pluck ...

That was so awesome! :smt003 I loved every second of it. It flowed pretty nicely and made you think a bit. This was my favorite part: We are the hunter ...