murtuza

This poem really reflects the on the mind and makes one ponder over the purpose of life. I like how you found the inspiration for writing this when you were ...

Wow, this is really powerful. "I know you still wash the blood of your hands, little boy It seems to be stuck under your nails. I know you can see ...

Well, I can't help but notice that the lines in the original chapter you've quoted and the lines in the poem are very much a alike, if not the same. ...

This poem has a really strong and true message to it and does give a brief account of life's unforgiving nature. The past is something we can never undo or ...

Heheh, this is such a fun piece! Considering that it was done spontaneously and in no time at all, I'd have to say that this is quite an impressive write. ...

I can definitely see this coming from a hip-hop/rapping artiste and you've done a fantastic job with the rhythm and the choruses which are the actual dialogue from the show ...

I start reading the first paragraph and think that this is a 'Solitary Reaper' type poem but then the 3rd stanza just took me by surprise! Beauty can be deadly ...

This is an excellent poem with a great premise and description. The first stanza was very well written and it showed really good language and skill. I greatly enjoyed reading ...

This poem is definitely epic. Good use of language and a fantastically woven tale. I was gripped to it from the beginning to end the and the description of the ...

If this was indeed a true incident, then my condolences to the boy's family. You've made this poem in a sort of playful, yet factual and realistic tone. However, I ...

The arrangement is brilliant. The lyrics are really good. There is a nice rhythm to it and I don't sense any strain on any of the lines either. Awesome work. ...

I really like how the persona describes its anguish and how it needs to be set free of the bonds. A very nice and insightful poem with a lot of ...

This is such a powerful poem that just reached out to me from the screen and gave me a big smack on my face. I was expecting something totally different ...

Well, you definitely conveyed the message and I was really convinced you were actually talking to me there (I'm a little scared now). I like the powerful and dangerous tone ...

On first reading this poem I feel like there is nothing that needs to be changed at all. There is a really nice feeling to it and I can sense ...