Published October 21, 2011
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Oh, wow. Love how this ends. Even though it's a depressing ending, I still like it. Great job.
Keep writing!
-JustMe
This poem has a really strong and true message to it and does give a brief account of life's unforgiving nature. The past is something we can never undo or hide under the mat. For me the first two stanzas gave a really good description about the persona's anguish.
Great work writing this and I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep the ink flowing!
I love this poem. It is a unique reflection of the stillness in life. Keep it up.