moonstar

Hi I've just read your lyrics and they're very good. I think with a bit of work it could be brilliant. At the moment it seems slightly more like a ...

Hello, I've just read your poem and it's so good! I don't think it had the best flow but what can I say I'm only a humble Novice. But apart ...

HI I've just read your piece and it was brilliant! I really liked the way you described the scene. It was clear to see what the characters thoughts were how ...

Hello, I read your poem and it was wonderful! It had a brilliant flow and really went deep if you get my meaning. Only think I'd say is your grammar ...

Hello. Just read chapter three of your story. Now judging that I haven't read the last two chapters... I still loved it! It was written so well and I loved ...

Hello, I've just read your lyrics and they're really good. I can easily put a rhythm to them in my head and it flows really well. :D Keep writing, Moonstar ...

Hi really liked your poem. It was different and interesting, not what you'd expect. Only thing I say is that the poem's called 'Heaven and holes ' but you only ...

Hi to put it simply I loved it! It was very good and I can access what you mean instantly. I've know things like that to go on in my ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. I clearly understood what you mean and it's completely true. It doesn't have the best flow but that's your choice. I like that you ...

All i can say is that your poem is beautiful! It almost made me cry it was so good. I really got what you were trying to say and I ...

hi I've just read your poem and your completely right: It will take me forever to forget it. It was very, very well written and had a great flow. Your ...