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Re: This Darkness of Mine
Depressing, but I'm a major fan of dark poetry. Overall I think this good (: you can feel the emotion coming off of it, the sadness and tradigty the narrator ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Ivory Wings
I think this poem is beautiful, towards the end it seems like the rhyming pattern got a little weird, or maybe its just how i looked at it. To me ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Memories on Grave.
Hello! Usually i am not a fan of poetry that does not rhyme it kind or irks me... But i must say i did fall in love with this. It's ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: What!?
hello! i smiled the whole time while reading this. This is very short but also a very clever poem, it had a strange sense of humor that i instantly fell ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Who Am I?
I love this! I also love the length you did not over complicate this by making it too long you got straight to the point and i like that. I ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: What am I?
This is pretty good, great grammar and i think the riddle idea is very cleaver. Although i would add more description to this, like when your talking about the killing ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: The Lady With The Lullaby
this is amazing and beautifully written! the description you used is absolutely amazing. i find this poem very peaceful and soothing not very many people can write like this. i ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Teaser/prologue for a considered Thriller.
I really enjoyed this! the description you used throughout the entire story was amazing and kept me entertained while reading this, grammar and spelling is good, the theme of the ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Alpha-Bet
i really like this! Your grammar is a lot better than mine.. I only found one spelling error and that was in the line "Just wake me up when there's ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Sunsets
i'm new here so ill try my best with this whole writing review things :p i really like this! i think its beautifully written and i love the topic you ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: The Sorry Message
short and simple. but at the same time deep , sometimes writers forget that things don't need to be long to be meaningful. But this states how a lot of ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: Why Does My Name Start With an M and end with an R?
i personally love this, its dark but it has great emotion , my favorite part is this Now the world is painted red. War has stained this land. its simple ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: I dare....
i really like this(: its short and simple, it does not need to be longer for it gets straight to the point. It gives a message that a lot of ...
Nov 16, 2013