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Re: Milkman!
That was so odd!
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: (No title)
Oooh what a threatening poem??? I must admit here that the last line does really make the rest of the poem er yay for the last line?! ...wonder what's in ...
Oct 2, 2007 -
Re: Disagreeable Persons
I agree completly with Claudette here - this is extremly hard to understand without you explaining it. Fair enough it's a haiku but dosen't there still needs to be some ...
Oct 2, 2007 -
Re: Nequadataliton - Illusions of Peace
Oh and one more thing - you said somewhere "Be at home with my kids" or something along those lines (I can't find it >.
Oct 2, 2007 -
Re: Hy
Thankyou both for taking your time to read and comment this! It's my first time at writing fantasy so I wasn't sure how my 'fantasy people' should look like. Mayve ...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes (revised)
hello both thanks for those great in-depth crits! They have really helped! And for both - Yob is a type of person who goes around getting drunk starting fights and ...
Aug 14, 2007 -
Re: Umbrella
thanks for taking the time to crit this Alainna :) . I didn't really like Liam in Ice cubes but I can see that he's interesting. Aww poor Liam he ...
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: Lyla. Part 9.
YAY it's LYLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH FOR POSTING THIS!!! Kite pretty much pointed out all the mistakes that I noticed so yay! Love it, love the ending of ...
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Melnikov #1 /P
Why is there a new post for this???? :S
Jul 10, 2007 -
Re: Umbrella
Thankyou both for the comments, and thanks Royboy for pointing out those mistakes, i will fix them laters :) I will work on the showing instead of telling thing, I'm ...
Jul 10, 2007 -
Re: POD 30:4 -The Verdict
I swear I had reviwed this!!!!!!!!! I must have just read it and make comments in my mind.... Anywho! Very very very happy that she got off! now just need ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Lyla. Part 7
YAY! I'm so happy! Part 7! I'm glad that things seem to be coming together for her, and I hope it's a little boy! All the best, Meevs xx
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: POD 30:3 -Tammy -On Both Accounts
Heloooooooooo! “You to…” Amber said, -Too This was very emotional, and great writing JC. Hope she wins! all the best, Meevs x
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #26
Wow that was quite a reviewing frenzy! Thanks for all you're comments, and I hope you enjoy the rest of Ice Cubes :D xx
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #15
I dod change tenses a lot by accident in Ice Cubes! But the new version is all sorted, like all the same tense. It's also verrrrry different to the Ice ...
Jun 1, 2007