Wait a minute.. wait a minute.. YOU being ATTENTIVE to description? Now that's just dirty, wicked.
Music bled from the floor-to-ceiling speakers
And you use VERBS to create your imagery, evocative earthy verbs. I'm hallucinating, right?
Okay, I'm coming back to this when I don't have to practise so much, but God, without detracting from your stab in the groin dialogue, you show your mastery of observation and urban dystopia? Serious? I'm going to STAB you in the GROIN you SUBLIME RATBASTARD!
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