Yeah. I had to sleep in the computer room, so I thought I'd at least do something fun. And now, I feel like reading more. Getting closer to caught up now, so I'll push on. 
Yeah. I had to sleep in the computer room, so I thought I'd at least do something fun. And now, I feel like reading more. Getting closer to caught up now, so I'll push on.
Wow that was quite a reviewing frenzy! Thanks for all you're comments, and I hope you enjoy the rest of Ice Cubes 
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“I liked you’re other room better
*your
I wont ever go in its room anyway.”
*won't
“No. No its not.
After that first nio could just be a comma, but that's your choice.
The whole time I thought of one thing and one thing only. Chris.
That's sad. He's like, emotionally dependant on Chris...
O_O -realises the time- Well, it's almost two, so i'm going to go get all the animals off my bed and sleep. See you.
“I liked you’re other room better…it was more you.”
“Well, you move house you get a new room, I have yet to make it mine.”
FANTASTIC!!! Awwwwwwww. Is he going to get in touch with Chris and Rob???
Jaimiy (Did I spell that completely wrong??)
I'm glad that you put this in like that. Sometimes subjects need to be dropped in at random because it seems more real, more believable."I had sex with Alan"
FANTASTIC!!! Awwwwwwww. Is he going to get in touch with Chris and Rob???Chris.
hey yeah there is a number 25 somewhere, its in my protfolio, I just posted 24.5 after...so it got a little ocnfyusing, sorry about that!
Meevs
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It was good, but where is 25? You put 24.5 and then went to 26! I cannot tell if it is a typo or you skipped some story, but good job. Hope to hear more. Later.
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