miyaviloves

I did like this but I felt that the narrator contradicted themselves without meaning to. I DON’T WANT HIM! -Caps really distract from the work, maybe use italics here or ...

I'm going to say, like the others that the caps don't add anything here. I dont think you really conencted the the reader very well, it was a bit bland ...

I will never foregt that book, before my nanna died she was in and out of hospital a lot and when we went up to see her I Would always ...

I will never forget studying this in year 11 at high school, and my English teacher put on different voices for the characters, and he always cried at the end ...

Hy well done on your first post, and well done for reviewing two other pieces before :) (Welcome to the YWS btw. I'm Meevs, if you need any help or ...

Hi Adriangarcia :D Even though this is ultimatley a religious poem I think that many people can relate to this. I am not a religious person but I enjoyed this ...

Is there any reason why you have posted this twice?? You should also review two other pieces of work before posting your own, you have only made three posts, two ...

Wow I really liked this Rubic. I liked showing it from the soilders point of view, it worked really well. Are you going to use this as a starting point ...

Ok first things first, you need to review two pieces of work before you post your own. Its a rule here at the YWS, and the mroe you review other ...

I have to agree with Blink here, I have no idea what purpose this is serving. It's not really a I'm not sure what it is. I don't think it ...

Thanks for messaging me about this second part, just sorry it has taken me couple of days to get round to it! Anyway, down to the review: I like that ...

OK well seeing as the grammatical things have been pointed out I can only now give you my opinion on this! At the moment it is too short, but I ...

Hey Kitty. Sorry to be harsh here but I really didn't like this, I found it pointless and annoying. It's not really a prologue, it dosen't give us background onto ...

I can relate to anything related to anorexia, my best friend is suffering from it and this is exactly what I tell her every day. Shes so thin she looks ...

Im still not sure what to make of this even now its in the 'other' section. Useful facts there, but its not exactly a writing piece. Im sure anyone oculd ...