mithrim96

I really like the quirky and whimsical nature of this poem. The way you've written between the lines of Shakespeare's sonnet with entirely 21st century language - e.g. "So long ...

Truly beautiful, no... not a good enough word... 'majestic', yeah. Your unique and remarkable writing style really wring out every emotion that could be present here. It's intriguing, deep and ...

Wow, this is beautiful - I have shivers! I can almost hear the tune in my head as I read it. That's the perfect experience for lyrics. A few problems, ...

Firstly... WOW WOW WOW WOW! Your story is amazing! I love your style of writing and your descriptions. Everything just flows together, it's wonderful. I only have a few annoyances ...

Hey, Mith here to review! I don't think I really have much to say that others haven't already said. *feels a little useless* I think I should begin with saying ...

Mith here! First of all, I absolutely adore your ending! It concludes the song in a really neat way and shows an optimistic expression that makes what seems like a ...

Mithrim here! I was pulled into your story by the title and description as I've been facing some difficulties with my friends and their ideas of suicide lately, so the ...

This is beautiful and wonderful and I agree completely. If find your style of writing a little disconcerting but I think that's just a personal thing. I didn't notice anything ...

Hey! This is Mith (or Jen) to review! (Sorry it's long!) Spelling and Grammar "Her starved frame rose like calm waves of a beach." --- I think, 'rose like THE ...

Mith here! Unlike my other reviews of your chapters, I'm not going to copy all of this and write as I go along as I feel it would be far ...

Hey, this is Mith and here's a review for you! (Just a pre-warning: I'm going to be quite critical and pick up on everything I notice) Sorry it's long. SPELLING ...

Hey, it's Mith here! Since this is rather short I can review it as I'd like to start doing for Poems and such. Here goes! First of all, I have ...

Hey it’s Mith, back again for your next review. It’s going to be the same gruelingly long thing as I did for the last chapter so hold onto something and ...

Hello, I'm Mith and I'm gonna review your work! This is really deep, really beautiful and subtly awesome. The emotion is quite melancholic and I get the feeling that the ...

First of all I have to mention, you have a lot of good reviews on this chapter! Other people seem to have mentioned everything they might need to but I’ll ...