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Re: as if by Magic... Prologue & Chapter 1
I’m pretty much your average human-born Wizard on Earth nowadays. Wizards are feared among humans. For no reason actually. The fact is, humans are afraid of Wizards because they don’t ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Invisible
I absolutly love it!!! I give it 5 stars!!
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: misery is a painting
I also agree that there is a little too much repitition. Obove all I love it... PM me if you want to share poery ideas...I love poetry of all kinds...
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: New Day
I like the description and all, but the flow was a little choppy. Other than that it was fine. Keep writing!!! ~Star
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Hate Me
*starts crying* I--it--it's b-b-beautiful!!!!!! Actually it reminds me of what happened to one of my friends and I...except we didn't make up... Anyway I love it!!!! Keep up the good ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Fade away
It's beautiful and descriptive and...*is at a loss for words* Oh my god you got me to shut up!!!!! joking!! ~Star
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: My Love
It's very descrptive and I'm wondering...Was this a real life experiance for you? Don't answer if it's too prying. ~Star
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Music of the planets.
I think it was pretty good!
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Petal Fall -- My first poem
I agree with ~Lashes~...It's short and pretty good.
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Chips
This is so cute. No bad things show up to me. And now I want potato chips! *laughs*
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: To Love...
I love it and I really have nothing to complain about here. And if you need help with writing go to poetry disscussion (sp?) and tips. That's the same for ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: The Pen is Mightier then the Sword
I love it! It really explains how words are better than actiona and how powerfull writers are. I really have no complaints here. Keep up the good work!!! ~Star
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: The (hopefully) Never Ending Poem
From the month of December: I love the way... I feel when you say... That you love me... And I feel so lucky to have you... Duh-duh-duuuuuuuuhhhhh... what shall you ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: I Am poetry
I just noticed this: Suzanne said: My only other issue with it is the fact that you never capitalize the pronoun I. Please respect grammar? Why do you need to ...
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: Sister Moon
Interesting suggestions... This was a kinda inspiration-gotta-write-it-down thing... Not my best work...
Dec 10, 2007
