miladjan

A very sensative and sweet poem. The use of the tamil word for mother "amma" you say, makes it feel very much more personal and sentimental. Such a simple an ...

Hi, I thought this was a beautiful poem. I must say I'm quite a sucker for cultural/folkloric things like the tradition you related in the stickied comment. And Dwynwen in ...

What an evocative poem. I love its loose and flexible form, and much of it's imagery sticks out. the blue light on and off illuminating the blue room This instantly ...

This is a beautiful poem. Drowning in nostalgia and longing. The personification of specific qualities or actions this friend has done as multiple "hers" is highly evocative and adds to ...

These are two wonderful poems, however my eyes have been attracted to the former "-a villianelle for the villian of my life". I love the structure of this first poem. ...

This is quite a unique structure to a poem, although I am not too accustomed to very modern poetry like this so it may not be. It's very free and ...

Hi there! Wow, this is very interesting. The way in which you write is very fascinating and unique. You have incredible style and wit. It's quite informal and wordy and ...

Hi there. This seems to be the first thing you've uploaded to this site, and it's quite interesting. This refrain of "don't yell" is constant and imposing, and the bulk ...

Hi there! This poem does speak truly to what's happening in the world right now. It will only worsen. It's common for any young person with any sort of awareness ...

This is structured very well. Not gimmicky at all, genuinely effective, symmetrical and cyclical. I assume this is about an over reliance on music and the running away from any ...

Wow, this was seriously amazing. It manages to be very rhythmic and musical even though it's unmetered. This punchy opening reads so quickly and rhymes so naturally. It's a vivid ...

This is fascinating prose. I think a lot of the juxtaposition utilised here works very well and is quite interesting. The substance of it is powerful, and it fits the ...

I understand this was written two years ago, but I can't help but point out that this a very biased and warped perspective, regardless of how you might think it's ...

I am not a Christian, but I still felt that this was a well written prose on faith. It is seemingly vivid but substantially vague, with sort of abstract descriptions: ...