milabales11

Wow this moved me. I love sad pieces and this really brought out that sad feeling with chills that I get when I read something really good like this. The ...

Great job! You did a wonderful job of connecting with the me as the reader. I felt sadness when the characters did and it was enjoyable to read. I've never ...

THIS IS AMAZING! So cool! I've never seen the layout of words like this and I am impressed. Ok, enough of obsessing over the dragon of words. The poem was ...

I loved this! It was very unique and had great detail. It was short but very powerful. The stars and the galaxy is very amazing and you showed that through ...

Wow. This was very detailed and interesting to read. I was on the edge of my seat I guess you could say. I really wanted to know what was going ...

You did a great job with this piece. You did a wonderful job with detail and making it unique. I was surprised when I saw your age and it made ...

Great job! I could see everything clearly from the detail that you put into this piece. You did a great job at making the reader feel what the main character ...

Haha, I love this! I love the idea of school being a battle and only some get through it. You are a very clever writer and know how to connect ...

You did a great job with detail. The story made me feel what the character was feeling from the very beginning and it drew me in. As the reader, I ...

This was really great and you did a good job. Everything was uniquely detailed and enjoyable to read. I would show you my favorite parts, but there are too many! ...

Wow. Just wow. This was really good and I couldn't keep my eyes away from it. At first I didn't want to read it because it was long, but I'm ...

This is really good and I love it! I loved how you worded everything especially the part about hiding white pills in the sky and saying that they are stars. ...