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Re: Impersonation
Hi! This story was one of my favorites that I've read on here. It was well written and I just like the way you write. The descriptions in the first ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: digestion
Like Shey, I'll just give you my interpretation of your poem. Although I will say that this is one of the weirder things I've read in my life. What I ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Dark Room
Hi! This was an interesting poem as it wasn't in the usual poem format with clear lines and stanzas. I liked the simile that you used, comparing years to waterfalls. ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Goodbye
Hi! I see you wrote a poem about your friend who's leaving. (I remember you said something about that in a review you left me recently). Honestly it's one of ...
Jul 10, 2017 -
Re: Sharp Edges
Hi! This was a very interesting poem, since it was so short, but it actually told quite a bit. I also like the idea about the rocks, especially throwing one ...
Jul 10, 2017 -
Re: Mosquitoes, Trees, and Hidden Places
Hi! So I think this is a pretty interesting topic to discuss, as you said, most people prefer to be around others. The idea with the mosquitoes was cool and ...
Jul 10, 2017 -
Re: I'd Wish For Us
Aw man this was such a sweet poem! I hope you get the life you want with this person. Also, I think the rhymes and the rhythms worked out so ...
Jul 8, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 4 of 'Jadeland'
Hi! As always, a great chapter. I'm happy that everyone is being nice to Tam and Yasmine now. That being said, I have a few small things for this review. ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: seasoned skin
Wow this poem was so great! I love how you slowly made your way to the final point of your poem keeping the reader guessing on what you're message is. ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: Melody
Hi! This was a wonderful idea, comparing making music with someone to loving them. I especially liked how you made the new person something that didn't fit with your own ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: Religion's impacts, and my reasons for my omnism(An essay hopefully better than it's title).
Hi! I think you expressed your ideas in a mature manner, especially since you didn't go bashing anyone else with a different opinion. I usually review poetry, but I'm trying ...
Jul 5, 2017 -
Re: The Plight of a Secret Love... (Why Do You Pretend You Don't Know Anything?)
Hi! Man I'm sorry you're having this kind of trouble. I feel like your poem gives the exact feeling of when you're wishing for someone to like you. That being ...
Jul 5, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 3 (part one) of 'Jadeland'
Hi! I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner, but I'm here to review! Your chapter is great, as they have been. So first thing is "... not a human ...
Jul 4, 2017 -
Re: Politics
Hi! I think this poem is exactly what people need to hear when they talk about politics. I personally hate talking politics and you explained exactly the reason why I ...
Jul 4, 2017 -
Re: The Girl In My Reflection
Hi! This poem actually helped me to understand what's going on in the heads of people with eating disorders much more than anything I've ever seen/ read, especially since it's ...
Jul 3, 2017
